--- 1/draft-ietf-regext-org-07.txt	2018-07-01 19:13:08.312183221 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-regext-org-08.txt	2018-07-01 19:13:08.388185057 -0700
@@ -1,22 +1,22 @@
 
 Internet Engineering Task Force                                  L. Zhou
 Internet-Draft                                                   N. Kong
 Intended status: Standards Track                                 G. Zhou
-Expires: December 17, 2018                                        X. Lee
+Expires: January 3, 2019                                          X. Lee
                                                                    CNNIC
                                                                 J. Gould
                                                           Verisign, Inc.
-                                                           June 15, 2018
+                                                            July 2, 2018
 
       Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization Mapping
-                        draft-ietf-regext-org-07
+                        draft-ietf-regext-org-08
 
 Abstract
 
    This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
    mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects
    stored in a shared central repository.  Specified in Extensible
    Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide
    additional features required for the provisioning of organizations.
 
 Status of This Memo
@@ -27,21 +27,21 @@
    Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on December 17, 2018.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on January 3, 2019.
 
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@@ -88,21 +88,21 @@
        4.2.1.  EPP <create> Command  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  15
        4.2.2.  EPP <delete> Command  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  19
        4.2.3.  EPP <renew> Command . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  20
        4.2.4.  EPP <transfer> Command  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  20
        4.2.5.  EPP <update> Command  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  21
      4.3.  Offline Review of Requested Actions . . . . . . . . . . .  25
    5.  Formal Syntax . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  27
    6.  Internationalization Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . .  36
    7.  IANA Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  36
      7.1.  XML Namespace . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  36
-     7.2.  EPP Extension Registry  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  36
+     7.2.  EPP Extension Registry  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  37
      7.3.  Role Type Values Registry . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  37
        7.3.1.  Registration Template . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  37
        7.3.2.  Initial Registry Contents . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  37
    8.  Implementation Status . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  38
      8.1.  Verisign EPP SDK  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  39
      8.2.  CNNIC Implementation  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  39
    9.  Security Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  39
    10. Acknowledgment  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  40
    11. References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  40
      11.1.  Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  40
@@ -1108,20 +1108,27 @@
    S:        <org:crDate>1999-04-03T22:00:00.0Z</org:crDate>
    S:      </org:creData>
    S:    </resData>
    S:    <trID>
    S:      <clTRID>ABC-12345</clTRID>
    S:      <svTRID>54321-XYZ</svTRID>
    S:    </trID>
    S:  </response>
    S:</epp>
 
+   The status of the organization object after returning this response
+   MUST include "pendingCreate".  The server operator reviews the
+   request offline, and informs the client of the outcome of the review
+   either by queuing a service message for retrieval via the <poll>
+   command or by using an out-of-band mechanism to inform the client of
+   the request.
+
    The service message MUST contain text that describes the notification
    in the child <msg> element of the response <msgQ> element.  In
    addition, the EPP <resData> element MUST contain a child
    <org:panData> element that identifies the organization namespace.
    The <org:panData> element contains the following child elements:
 
    o  A <org:id> element that contains the server-unique identifier of
       the organization object.  The <org:id> element contains a REQUIRED
       "paResult" attribute.  A positive boolean value indicates that the
       request has been approved and completed.  A negative boolean value
@@ -1919,20 +1924,24 @@
       *  Modified section 7.2.
 
    Organization WG document-07:
 
       *  Updated typos.
 
       *  Added dns-operator in section 7.1.
 
       *  Added "OPTIONAL" for <org:addr>
 
+   Organization WG document-08:
+
+      *  Updated "Offline Review of Requested Actions".
+
 Authors' Addresses
 
    Linlin Zhou
    CNNIC
    4 South 4th Street, Zhongguancun, Haidian District
    Beijing, Beijing  100190
    China
 
    Phone: +86 10 5881 2677
    Email: zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn