--- 1/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-23.txt 2018-06-15 10:15:44.868330148 -0700 +++ 2/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-24.txt 2018-06-15 10:15:44.952332162 -0700 @@ -1,26 +1,26 @@ -Network Working Group A. Petrescu +IPWAVE Working Group A. Petrescu Internet-Draft CEA, LIST Intended status: Standards Track N. Benamar -Expires: December 15, 2018 Moulay Ismail University +Expires: December 17, 2018 Moulay Ismail University J. Haerri Eurecom J. Lee Sangmyung University T. Ernst YoGoKo - June 13, 2018 + June 15, 2018 Transmission of IPv6 Packets over IEEE 802.11 Networks operating in mode Outside the Context of a Basic Service Set (IPv6-over-80211-OCB) - draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-23.txt + draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-24 Abstract In order to transmit IPv6 packets on IEEE 802.11 networks running outside the context of a basic service set (OCB, earlier "802.11p") there is a need to define a few parameters such as the supported Maximum Transmission Unit size on the 802.11-OCB link, the header format preceding the IPv6 header, the Type value within it, and others. This document describes these parameters for IPv6 and IEEE 802.11-OCB networks; it portrays the layering of IPv6 on 802.11-OCB @@ -35,21 +35,21 @@ Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF). Note that other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet-Drafts. The list of current Internet- Drafts is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/current/. Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of six months and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other documents at any time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference material or to cite them other than as "work in progress." - This Internet-Draft will expire on December 15, 2018. + This Internet-Draft will expire on December 17, 2018. Copyright Notice Copyright (c) 2018 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved. This document is subject to BCP 78 and the IETF Trust's Legal Provisions Relating to IETF Documents (https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info) in effect on the date of publication of this document. Please review these documents @@ -350,22 +350,22 @@ the structure of the internal subnets in each car is relatively stable. The 802.11 networks in OCB mode may be considered as 'ad-hoc' networks. The addressing model for such networks is described in [RFC5889]. The operation of the Neighbor Discovery protocol (ND) over 802.11-OCB links is different than over 802.11 links. In OCB, the link layer does not ensure that all associated members receive all messages, - because there is no association operation. The operation of ND over - 802.11-OCB is not specified in this document. + because there is no association operation. Neighbor Discovery (ND) + is used over 802.11-OCB. The operation of the Mobile IPv6 protocol over 802.11-OCB links is different than on other links. The Movement Detection operation (section 11.5.1 of [RFC6275]) can not rely on Neighbor Unreachability Detection operation of the Neighbor Discovery protocol, for the reason mentioned in the previous paragraph. Also, the 802.11-OCB link layer is not a lower layer that can provide an indication that a link layer handover has occured. The operation of the Mobile IPv6 protocol over 802.11-OCB is not specified in this document. @@ -646,29 +646,35 @@ document freely available at URL http://standards.ieee.org/getieee802/ download/802.11p-2010.pdf retrieved on September 20th, 2013.". Appendix A. ChangeLog The changes are listed in reverse chronological order, most recent changes appearing at the top of the list. + From draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-23 to draft-ietf-ipwave- + ipv6-over-80211ocb-24 + + o Nit: wrote "IPWAVE Working Group" on the front page, instead of + "Network Working Group". + + o Addressed the comments on 6MAN: replaced a sentence about ND + problem with "is used over 802.11-OCB". + From draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-22 to draft-ietf-ipwave- ipv6-over-80211ocb-23 o No content modifications, but check the entire draft chain on IPv6-only: xml2rfc, submission on tools.ietf.org and datatracker. - o Improved the Frame Format section: MUST use QoSData, specify the - values within; clarified the Ethernet Adaptation Layer text. - From draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-21 to draft-ietf-ipwave- ipv6-over-80211ocb-22 o Corrected typo, use dash in "802.11-OCB" instead of space. o Improved the Frame Format section: MUST use QoSData, specify the values within; clarified the Ethernet Adaptation Layer text. From draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-20 to draft-ietf-ipwave- ipv6-over-80211ocb-21