--- 1/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-20.txt 2018-03-03 10:13:38.045896884 -0800 +++ 2/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-21.txt 2018-03-03 10:13:38.121898684 -0800 @@ -1,26 +1,26 @@ Network Working Group A. Petrescu Internet-Draft CEA, LIST Intended status: Standards Track N. Benamar -Expires: September 3, 2018 Moulay Ismail University +Expires: September 4, 2018 Moulay Ismail University J. Haerri Eurecom J. Lee Sangmyung University T. Ernst YoGoKo - March 2, 2018 + March 3, 2018 Transmission of IPv6 Packets over IEEE 802.11 Networks operating in mode Outside the Context of a Basic Service Set (IPv6-over-80211-OCB) - draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-20.txt + draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-21.txt Abstract In order to transmit IPv6 packets on IEEE 802.11 networks running outside the context of a basic service set (OCB, earlier "802.11p") there is a need to define a few parameters such as the supported Maximum Transmission Unit size on the 802.11-OCB link, the header format preceding the IPv6 header, the Type value within it, and others. This document describes these parameters for IPv6 and IEEE 802.11-OCB networks; it portrays the layering of IPv6 on 802.11-OCB @@ -35,21 +35,21 @@ Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF). Note that other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet-Drafts. The list of current Internet- Drafts is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/current/. Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of six months and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other documents at any time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference material or to cite them other than as "work in progress." - This Internet-Draft will expire on September 3, 2018. + This Internet-Draft will expire on September 4, 2018. Copyright Notice Copyright (c) 2018 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved. This document is subject to BCP 78 and the IETF Trust's Legal Provisions Relating to IETF Documents (https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info) in effect on the date of publication of this document. Please review these documents @@ -218,25 +218,25 @@ An Ethernet Adaptation Layer makes an 802.11 MAC look to IP Networking layer as a more traditional Ethernet layer. At reception, this layer takes as input the IEEE 802.11 header and the Logical-Link Layer Control Header and produces an Ethernet II Header. At sending, the reverse operation is performed. The operation of the Ethernet Adaptation Layer is depicted by the double arrow in Figure 1. - +--------------------+------------+-------------+---------+-----------+ + +------------------+------------+-------------+---------+-----------+ | 802.11 header | LLC Header | IPv6 Header | Payload |.11 Trailer| - +--------------------+------------+-------------+---------+-----------+ + +------------------+------------+-------------+---------+-----------+ \ / \ / - ----------------------------- -------- + --------------------------- -------- \---------------------------------------------/ ^ | 802.11-to-Ethernet Adaptation Layer | v +---------------------+-------------+---------+ | Ethernet II Header | IPv6 Header | Payload | +---------------------+-------------+---------+ @@ -438,25 +438,26 @@ document. 8. Acknowledgements The authors would like to thank Witold Klaudel, Ryuji Wakikawa, Emmanuel Baccelli, John Kenney, John Moring, Francois Simon, Dan Romascanu, Konstantin Khait, Ralph Droms, Richard 'Dick' Roy, Ray Hunter, Tom Kurihara, Michal Sojka, Jan de Jongh, Suresh Krishnan, Dino Farinacci, Vincent Park, Jaehoon Paul Jeong, Gloria Gwynne, Hans-Joachim Fischer, Russ Housley, Rex Buddenberg, Erik Nordmark, - Bob Moskowitz, Andrew (Dryden?), Georg Mayer, Dorothy Stanley, Sandra + Bob Moskowitz, Andrew Dryden, Georg Mayer, Dorothy Stanley, Sandra Cespedes, Mariano Falcitelli, Sri Gundavelli, Abdussalam Baryun, - Margaret Cullen, Erik Kline, Carlos Jesus Bernardos Cano and William - Whyte. Their valuable comments clarified particular issues and - generally helped to improve the document. + Margaret Cullen, Erik Kline, Carlos Jesus Bernardos Cano, Ronald in + 't Velt, Katrin Sjoberg, Roland Bless and William Whyte. Their + valuable comments clarified particular issues and generally helped to + improve the document. Pierre Pfister, Rostislav Lisovy, and others, wrote 802.11-OCB drivers for linux and described how. For the multicast discussion, the authors would like to thank Owen DeLong, Joe Touch, Jen Linkova, Erik Kline, Brian Haberman and participants to discussions in network working groups. The authors would like to thank participants to the Birds-of- a-Feather "Intelligent Transportation Systems" meetings held at IETF @@ -587,25 +588,20 @@ over Ethernet Networks", draft-hinden-6man-rfc2464bis-02 (work in progress), March 2017. [I-D.ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-survey] Jeong, J., Cespedes, S., Benamar, N., Haerri, J., and M. Wetterwald, "Survey on IP-based Vehicular Networking for Intelligent Transportation Systems", draft-ietf-ipwave- vehicular-networking-survey-00 (work in progress), July 2017. - [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11] - Szigeti, T., Henry, J., and F. Baker, "Diffserv to IEEE - 802.11 Mapping", draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-11 (work in - progress), December 2017. - [I-D.perkins-intarea-multicast-ieee802] Perkins, C., Stanley, D., Kumari, W., and J. Zuniga, "Multicast Considerations over IEEE 802 Wireless Media", draft-perkins-intarea-multicast-ieee802-03 (work in progress), July 2017. [IEEE-1609.2] "IEEE SA - 1609.2-2016 - IEEE Standard for Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments (WAVE) -- Security Services for Applications and Management Messages. Example URL @@ -646,20 +642,27 @@ document freely available at URL http://standards.ieee.org/getieee802/ download/802.11p-2010.pdf retrieved on September 20th, 2013.". Appendix A. ChangeLog The changes are listed in reverse chronological order, most recent changes appearing at the top of the list. + From draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-20 to draft-ietf-ipwave- + ipv6-over-80211ocb-21 + + o Corrected a few nits and added names in Acknowledgments section. + + o Removed unused reference to old Internet Draft tsvwg about QoS. + From draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-19 to draft-ietf-ipwave- ipv6-over-80211ocb-20 o Reduced the definition of term "802.11-OCB". o Left out of this specification which 802.11 header to use to transmit IP packets in OCB mode (QoS Data header, Data header, or any other). o Added 'MUST' use an Ethernet Adaptation Layer, instead of 'is